Conspiracy X - (Progressive Deep House)

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KVRer
15 posts since 27 Apr, 2005

Post Thu Mar 04, 2021 2:29 am

Hey everyone.

Here's a new track I have been working on. All feedback will be appreciated on how to improve it.

https://soundcloud.com/reminiscence/conspiracy-x

Thanks in advance! :phones:

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KVRAF
7564 posts since 11 Jun, 2006

Post Thu Mar 04, 2021 4:38 am

needs more kickbell
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KVRian
971 posts since 23 Nov, 2018 from Birmingham, UK

Post Fri Mar 05, 2021 2:36 am

Musically...

Nice atmospheric groove going on...all the parts weave together effectively.
for me it needs a LOT more material for something that long...nowhere near enough development, contrast and strong melodic hooks.

Production-wise:
That kick is quite dominant when it comes in...too much so for me.

Frequencies are a little unbalanced...

VERY heavy at the bottom end...somewhere centred around the 40Hz area I would say from listening?

More minor points:
Bit of a frequency 'hole' in the centre at times...400Hz upt 1 - 2 kHz (I'm guessing again) but it also has sudden spikes all over this area from time to time.

Top end - again a little uneven with significant spikes all over the place from time to time.

For me it's also overcompressed / limited in certain sections....dynamics too squashed.

And, yeah...that KICKBELL needs serious work! :)
Mark Taylor, Chameleon Music - Professional composition and sound design for all media since 1994.

https://www.chameleonmusic.co.uk/

KVRer

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15 posts since 27 Apr, 2005

Post Sat Mar 06, 2021 4:39 am

Thanks peeps. I'll give another go. :)

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