Electro Rock Track - *New and Improved With Lemon Scent and Less Bass*

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KVRist
256 posts since 25 Jan, 2010

Post Tue Mar 09, 2021 1:30 am

Here is a new electro rock track 128 bpm

Here is the updated version:

https://soundcloud.com/mike_twelve/clown-shoes

https://soundcloud.com/mike_twelve/mike ... lown-shoes

Enjoy :phones:
Last edited by smd12 on Wed Mar 10, 2021 10:25 am, edited 2 times in total.

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KVRian
971 posts since 23 Nov, 2018 from Birmingham, UK

Post Tue Mar 09, 2021 6:12 am

Good listen...some interesting little musical ideas in there that all fit together pretty well.

Mix-wise...felt that the bass just 'got in the way' of everything else to some extent at times....maybe needed narrowing + a bit of EQ tweaking?
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KVRist
444 posts since 4 Jun, 2018 from Wiltshire, Uk

Post Tue Mar 09, 2021 9:09 am

I can't judge the mix as i'm listening on earbuds. But I liked all the musical ideas presented throughout the track. I reckon it would be better though for you to condense those down to around 4 minutes.

KVRist

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256 posts since 25 Jan, 2010

Post Tue Mar 09, 2021 11:16 am

ChameleonMusic wrote:
Tue Mar 09, 2021 6:12 am
Good listen...some interesting little musical ideas in there that all fit together pretty well.

Mix-wise...felt that the bass just 'got in the way' of everything else to some extent at times....maybe needed narrowing + a bit of EQ tweaking?
Thanks for listening and the review.

Bass is a tad bit much on this one :D

:tu:

KVRist

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256 posts since 25 Jan, 2010

Post Tue Mar 09, 2021 11:17 am

frank1985 wrote:
Tue Mar 09, 2021 9:09 am
I can't judge the mix as i'm listening on earbuds. But I liked all the musical ideas presented throughout the track. I reckon it would be better though for you to condense those down to around 4 minutes.
Thanks for listening and the review :tu:

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KVRAF
5881 posts since 13 Nov, 2015 from Norway

Post Tue Mar 09, 2021 12:22 pm

yes the bass is a bit too much. maybe lower the volume a bit and cut everything below 50-70 hz or so? nonetheless i really enjoyed the track. well done! :)
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KVRAF
7564 posts since 11 Jun, 2006

Post Tue Mar 09, 2021 6:55 pm

good listen, the bass can use some sub 60hz highpass filtering to
cut boomyness. the volumes at around 60hz are actually ok imo.
still enjoyed the track as-is. well done :tu:
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KVRist

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256 posts since 25 Jan, 2010

Post Wed Mar 10, 2021 3:46 am

Halonmusic wrote:
Tue Mar 09, 2021 12:22 pm
yes the bass is a bit too much. maybe lower the volume a bit and cut everything below 50-70 hz or so? nonetheless i really enjoyed the track. well done! :)
Thanks for listening and the review :D

KVRist

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256 posts since 25 Jan, 2010

Post Wed Mar 10, 2021 3:47 am

layzer wrote:
Tue Mar 09, 2021 6:55 pm
good listen, the bass can use some sub 60hz highpass filtering to
cut boomyness. the volumes at around 60hz are actually ok imo.
still enjoyed the track as-is. well done :tu:
Thanks for listening and the review :tu:

KVRist

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256 posts since 25 Jan, 2010

Post Wed Mar 10, 2021 10:24 am


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