Made this last night, it's got vocals and is some sort of half dark, half bright, synthpop :) It's almost finished

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KVRer
2 posts since 21 May, 2021

Post Mon Jun 07, 2021 11:51 pm

https://soundcloud.com/user-970418947/because-3

It's a verse and a chorus, but I am working on the rest :)

It has just gibberish for lyrics right now, but I think I will exchange the lyrics for being about time travel with hints to back to the future as the picture on soundcloud suggests.

Looking for feedback and constructive criticism.

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KVRAF
1535 posts since 19 Aug, 2008

Post Tue Jun 08, 2021 11:26 am

Great potential.
However, I hope you're going to arrange it well, drop some instruments out now and then, and highlight the chorus etc. At the moment its a flat arrangement.

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KVRAF
6100 posts since 13 Nov, 2015 from Norway

Post Tue Jun 08, 2021 1:06 pm

cool. the vocals could be louder
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KVRist
62 posts since 16 Nov, 2017 from Germany

Post Fri Jun 11, 2021 8:47 am

:tu: Great Song by you, great vocals, I like it! (Maybe you could make your vocals a little louder)
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