Drum & Bass from Switzerland

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KVRer
3 posts since 25 Aug, 2021

Post Sat Sep 11, 2021 8:57 am

Hi

This is my new song

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lryS192vPVA

Enjoy :wink:

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KVRAF
1647 posts since 19 Aug, 2008

Post Sat Sep 18, 2021 5:13 pm

It took 40 secs to really start. Many people might have switched off by then. But after that there was some good drum n bass percussion and bass.
It seems like you had a motif idea, but that idea was not really developed.

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KVRAF
7345 posts since 18 Aug, 2007 from NYC

Post Sat Sep 18, 2021 8:49 pm

I have to agree that to start it could use a more solid intro. Then it needs to be further developed. There's just a 2 bar break before It takes another 1.5 minutes before another change happens for again, just 2 bars before that same motif plays over and over. It's hard to sit through BUT... IF you revisit this and develop it further, it could be something.
That motif doesn't have to be played by the same synth over and over. You can play around with it so maybe the bass takes it over while the lead is now doing something different. Change is good and it makes it interesting.

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