WIP track Need some thoughts
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- KVRist
- Topic Starter
- 45 posts since 16 Aug, 2020
Hey All, hope you are doing well.
Just need some thoughts on something im working on, have a listen.
https://soundcloud.com/whit3heart/licha ... lRujWrMVUS
Just need some thoughts on something im working on, have a listen.
https://soundcloud.com/whit3heart/licha ... lRujWrMVUS
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- Boss Lovin' DR
- 12493 posts since 15 Mar, 2002 from the grimness of yorkshire
It says 'this track was not found..'
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- KVRist
- Topic Starter
- 45 posts since 16 Aug, 2020
Sorry that was my bad i think it should work now
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- KVRAF
- 9729 posts since 18 Aug, 2007 from NYC
You lost your energy after that first snare hit, and not to mention, that snare never came back. The rim hit won't cut it.
I know this is the fake master for our benefit but I would turn down the bass and create some more space in the body of the song.
The intro teases lots of space that completely disappears, replaced with a wall of sound. It needs room to breathe and you should find a way to bring the vocals back in more than just percussive snippets... It doesn't have to be a full-on vocal passage, but just throw a complete word in here or there to build up more tension to be resolved once you bring the vocals back in (repeat of the intro with drums).
I don't think I need to mention it much, but just in case... I'm hoping the snare riser is just a temp because it needs a crunchier snare (similar to that single snare hit).
Nice melodies in there. It's too early to say more about it but I'm looking forward to seeing where you go with this.
I know this is the fake master for our benefit but I would turn down the bass and create some more space in the body of the song.
The intro teases lots of space that completely disappears, replaced with a wall of sound. It needs room to breathe and you should find a way to bring the vocals back in more than just percussive snippets... It doesn't have to be a full-on vocal passage, but just throw a complete word in here or there to build up more tension to be resolved once you bring the vocals back in (repeat of the intro with drums).
I don't think I need to mention it much, but just in case... I'm hoping the snare riser is just a temp because it needs a crunchier snare (similar to that single snare hit).
Nice melodies in there. It's too early to say more about it but I'm looking forward to seeing where you go with this.