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Synthack
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687 posts since 4 Dec, 2021

Post Wed Jan 26, 2022 12:55 am

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Medvedium
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43 posts since 8 Jan, 2022 from Великая Россия

Post Wed Jan 26, 2022 2:25 pm

Interesting... :)

About the sound:
Yes, it sounds over-compressed... As the bpm is slow, there's a wish to hear more dynamics...
Also it feels like the highs would have more air, and so are the mids :ud:
The pluck that comes around 2:55 improves the situation, but it wants to have more room in the mix )
Guitars wish to have more body, seems like the noisy distortion ate all of it )

About the arrangement:
It sounds like an looong intro, when you expect smth bigger, but it doesn't happen :?
In the very beginning there's a typical industrial midbass with nona interval (or alike), but it sounds so quiet that like it's almost doesn't exist :neutral:
Also something tonal wants to be here - not obligatory some extra melodic line, but some background mid-hi pulsating sine or smth alike will be a good contrast to the noise. :hyper:

Anyway, the basis of the track is nice, :phones: great job is done :tu:
It was worth listening and commenting :tu:

Synthack
KVRian
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687 posts since 4 Dec, 2021

Post Wed Jan 26, 2022 2:26 pm

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