A Story Unfolds - Original Production

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Juz Music
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14 posts since 13 Apr, 2022 from Switzerland

Post Sat May 14, 2022 12:58 pm

Hello everybody

I've just finished my new pretty calm orchestral project

This one called A Story Unfolds and gave me 2 week to finish it


Will be awesome to have opinions about it :)


Ju'z Music

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1719 posts since 19 Aug, 2008

Post Sat May 14, 2022 2:20 pm

I think you blended the instruments very well: the brass, strings and winds, and made the chordal structure very interesting.
However, the "story" didn't unfold. I was waiting for it to take me somewhere and tell a story, but it took me around in a circle.
I feel a "call and response" - a conversation - was missing. A few bars of percussion... some more variety. I was waiting to be nicely surprised by something, waiting to be told a story, but was left a little frustrated. Sorry. There's a lot to like about it, but the arrangement and storytelling need to be enhanced imho.

Rene Asologuitar
243 posts since 2 Apr, 2022

Post Sun May 15, 2022 11:27 am

Beautiful intro, Looks like I am in a play and the curtain just open up, and delivers a magnificent scene of beauty. I agree with Bansaw, you need to lead us somewhere.
The recording and the composition is very nicely done and the music is truly enjoyable, just a little enhancement.
Great work!!!

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Juz Music
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14 posts since 13 Apr, 2022 from Switzerland

Post Mon May 16, 2022 10:22 pm

Thank you for your honest review :) I think title track is not really representative of the music

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317 posts since 20 Nov, 2021

Post Wed May 18, 2022 1:34 am

Lovely sounding track. It feels like an introduction rather than a whole story, but it could stand on its own as that.

1 posts since 20 Dec, 2021

Post Wed May 18, 2022 11:53 am


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