Heaven (ver.4). A little joyful piece

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bjt2
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65 posts since 17 May, 2022

Post Tue May 24, 2022 6:32 am

My youtube channel: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCRwIM2 ... D9DlgfjzLQ
Thread on my programmable VST: viewtopic.php?t=581986

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ChameleonMusic
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1584 posts since 23 Nov, 2018 from Birmingham, UK

Post Wed May 25, 2022 5:54 am

Interesting little listen - enjoyed it.

Are you going to develop it at all? It has the potential to grow even further.

Would be nice to try out that melody on a sound that contrasts with the string pad maybe? Also - good choice of notes for me here - quite hooky and catchy, but I felt the rhythm of the melody could've been more fluid?

You could bring in other simple melodies one by one to lift the atmosphere bit by bit?

Loads of potential with this.
Mark Taylor, Chameleon Music - Professional composition and sound design for all media since 1994.

https://www.chameleonmusic.co.uk/

bjt2
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65 posts since 17 May, 2022

Post Wed May 25, 2022 7:04 am

ChameleonMusic wrote: Wed May 25, 2022 5:54 am Interesting little listen - enjoyed it.

Are you going to develop it at all? It has the potential to grow even further.

Would be nice to try out that melody on a sound that contrasts with the string pad maybe? Also - good choice of notes for me here - quite hooky and catchy, but I felt the rhythm of the melody could've been more fluid?

You could bring in other simple melodies one by one to lift the atmosphere bit by bit?

Loads of potential with this.
This was one of my early pieces, where i was very repetitive. I have studied an on line course and now I know that a repetitive melody is not the best.
This was one of many pieces in which i used sampled instrument and not electronic or synth music. The pad are actual sampled strings (string ensemble). I love the sound of normal orchestal instrument, but maybe some electronic instrument on an orchestral background can be interesting. I will think something...
The melody is not fluid because i used quantization. Maybe a more humanization can bring some fluidification, but i am a very awful player, and i don't have a controller. (i use the plain PC keyboard...)

I will post some other piece in these days. Just i don't want to flood this little music paradise...

This is one of my favorite pieces... I think today will post another my favorite...
My youtube channel: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCRwIM2 ... D9DlgfjzLQ
Thread on my programmable VST: viewtopic.php?t=581986

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