Summertime yet again (indie pop?)

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77 posts since 14 Jul, 2018 from Gdansk, Poland

Post Wed Jun 22, 2022 11:44 am

This is as much "energetic" or "fun" as I can get with music.
Music, just like tortilla, is no fun without a bit of "cheese". :clown:

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66 posts since 8 Jan, 2022 from Великая Россия

Post Thu Jun 23, 2022 1:29 am

Intro is toooo quiet - it wouldn't be a problem but I hear the piece was kinda mixed, as it's wide and close to be balanced and clean.
Musically the idea is understandable and is realized very well.
About mixing - some instruments (esp-ly lead guitar) have resonances in mids.
The potential of the stereo field isn't fully used - almost all the instruments are very close and dry, they all need some spatial placement.
In common it's good

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1576 posts since 23 Nov, 2018 from Birmingham, UK

Post Thu Jun 23, 2022 1:59 am

Great listen - enjoyed it...lovely bouncy, summer energy about it all with some little catchy hooks in there as well.

i do agree with Medvedium that the intro is a little too quiet compared to the first main section?

The one thing I personally wanted was some sort of lead / vocal line above the main groove at some point? But, it works as it stands a well!
Mark Taylor, Chameleon Music - Professional composition and sound design for all media since 1994.

Rene Asologuitar
353 posts since 2 Apr, 2022

Post Thu Jun 23, 2022 8:38 am

Hi Vertlain,
Very playful and joyful sounds from your composition.
Love the beat, and the happy vibe this music display.
Well done!

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