Geomystery - 1962 (trance)

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Geomystery
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39 posts since 31 May, 2020

Post Fri Nov 04, 2022 11:56 pm

Hi there, I've been very productive recently. I welcome critique of any kind to help me refine my music.

https://soundcloud.com/geomystery/1962a

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margaret0547
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434 posts since 20 Nov, 2021

Post Sat Nov 05, 2022 5:22 am

Very good track. I highly recommend it. Production, structure, sound, all excellent.
I listened to some of your other tracks - all excellent.

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Bansaw
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1858 posts since 19 Aug, 2008

Post Sat Nov 05, 2022 3:59 pm

Some good rhythmic elements and some uniqueness. Nice!
However mixing could be better imho. @0:22 the rhythmic element overpowers the lead, where the lead should be more prominent.
Sidechained bass too loud in the mix.
@2:59 that section, it sounds like a thin saw pluck which also seems to be sidechained if I'm not mistaken. Its too thin, and very forward in the mix.

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Geomystery
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39 posts since 31 May, 2020

Post Sun Nov 06, 2022 12:18 am

margaret0547: Thank You !
Bansaw: Thank You, I will look into it.

vstdls
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87 posts since 26 Jun, 2021

Post Sun Nov 06, 2022 8:15 pm

Really good! I dig when it sort of breaks open at 2:25ish with the added instruments adding energy.
I really wanted the beat and snare to come back hard halfway through the breakdown, but you made me wait.
And I'm no expert, but I think the main bass is a touch too loud. I like it!

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Geomystery
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39 posts since 31 May, 2020

Post Sun Nov 06, 2022 11:34 pm

Is seems that making main bass too loud is my speciality. Sometimes I keep that habit under control, but sometimes it's just there.

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