thanks all for listening and your comments. i am glad that you feel only 2 songsseismic1 wrote: ↑Tue Dec 20, 2022 12:49 am It seemed like a song in two halves. I really liked the energy and the dynamics in the first 2:15 or so. The melodic variation in this section was great, too. I thought the last two minutes were pleasant to listen to, but had a little less energy than the first half. Maybe you could have added an adapted reprise of the section from 1:29 to 2:16 at 3:21 and then continued from the original 3:21 to the end. This is only my personal feeling and it should be taken with a very large pinch of saltThese changes would take the track length over 5 minutes, which might not be to your liking.
The mix was great.
Good work
because in the beginning the elements of the song belonged to at least 3-5 different tracks. i always make small sketches, but i only keep the best parts and in the end i try to fit them into one single track. in this case i was pretty happy with the more calm ending section.
