Retro/Synthwave - Guitar Sax and Synths

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KVRist
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109 posts since 26 Jun, 2021

Post Thu Mar 02, 2023 8:24 pm

Hi everyone - took a little break for work, but back to my same formula. I've worked in a lot of the advice I've gotten here over the past year, I hope some things have improved. I appreciated any feedback of all kinds. Working on my mixes and balances, and getting emotions to carry through the music. Thank you for your time - it's the most valuable thing you've got.

Reaper - Diva and Repro, some free drum machines, some EQs, and the Brainworx BlackBox for color.

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Uncle E
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14183 posts since 22 Nov, 2000 from Southern California

Post Thu Mar 02, 2023 9:04 pm

Great vibe! I love how you got the sounds of the guitar and sax to sit so well with the synths, that can be challenging. You can gain some overall volume if you reduce the level of the bass.

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KVRist
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109 posts since 26 Jun, 2021

Post Fri Mar 03, 2023 1:47 pm

Thanks Uncle E - love your store.

Great tip! Thank you very much!

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Allomerus
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2976 posts since 28 Aug, 2012 from Melbourne, Australia

Post Fri Mar 03, 2023 11:40 pm

Good one vstdls. Lovely flow and nicely melodic.
I like the ending as it drifts off.
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Bansaw
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1892 posts since 19 Aug, 2008

Post Sat Mar 04, 2023 4:51 pm

Nice retro vibe, like the soaring guitars.
Diva is my favouite synth I don't own. One of these days I'll buy it.

Rene Asologuitar
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924 posts since 2 Apr, 2022

Post Sat Mar 04, 2023 7:23 pm

Truly nice vibe, love the guitar!!!
Synths galore, simply lovely!!!
I am enjoying this recording.

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KVRist
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109 posts since 26 Jun, 2021

Post Mon Mar 06, 2023 5:26 am

Thank you Rene and Allomerus for the listens and words. I always appreciate it

VCA-089
KVRist
223 posts since 26 Jun, 2018

Post Mon Mar 06, 2023 8:31 am

It has a very thick sound and deep dreamy atmosphere. Great sounding synths! I feel there is a lot of work put into creating this arrangement.

In terms of mixing, the high-mid range (2-5k) needs to be tamed a little bit. There also seems to be too much reverb/echoes on individual tracks that muddies the mix.

It's a bit shame that melodies doesn't evolve into fully featured solos. I expected to hear a sax solo for example (I could imagine it would perfectly fit to the context), but it mostly plays in the background...
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eassae
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960 posts since 18 May, 2021

Post Mon Mar 06, 2023 2:08 pm

This sounds great. Love the big wide sound. Like the writing as well.
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KVRist
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109 posts since 26 Jun, 2021

Post Mon Mar 13, 2023 7:39 pm

VCA-089 wrote: Mon Mar 06, 2023 8:31 am It has a very thick sound and deep dreamy atmosphere. Great sounding synths! I feel there is a lot of work put into creating this arrangement.

In terms of mixing, the high-mid range (2-5k) needs to be tamed a little bit. There also seems to be too much reverb/echoes on individual tracks that muddies the mix.

It's a bit shame that melodies doesn't evolve into fully featured solos. I expected to hear a sax solo for example (I could imagine it would perfectly fit to the context), but it mostly plays in the background...
Perfect, thanks - I've worked through both your suggestions. Some dynamic EQ on the 2-5K (you're right) and fleshed out the sax. Someday I hope to release it finished. I appreciate it.

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