a fat furry pudge always looking for chocolate fudge (weird pop)

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Another weird popish rock song: https://archive.org/download/irrational ... ape%29.mp3

Needs better vocals karaoke mix: https://archive.org/download/irrational ... mix%29.mp3

Amp Room and Mod Sound Tubular for amp simulation. BFD for drums. Reaktor for vocoding.

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Verse 1:
I've got a pain in my big fat belly
Up down left right where's the jelly
I'm getting hungry
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Why can't I stop
I'm too fat to walk
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Eating more and more becoming as big as a pregnant boar
 
Chorus 1:
There's a way to be free -- dead -- like a memory memory
Free from the tautology, oh gee oh me 
There's a way to be free -- dead -- like a memory memory
Free from the tautology, oh gee oh me oh gee oh me 

Verse 2:
Covered in fur and always called sir
Obscures my grand overture -- No one knows my true form
Of course they know. I'm delusional. 
But I'm happy to pretend. No one knows my true form
   
Chorus 2:
There's a way to be free -- dead -- like a memory memory
Free from the tautology, oh gee oh me oh gee
Bones and ashes -- fire ashes and dust -- everything will combust 
There's a way to be free -- dead -- like a memory memory 

Verse 3:
Why can't I be a ballerina dancing across the sea.
Instead of a fat furry pudge always looking for chocolate fudge.
Maybe in the next life I'll be a.
Maybe I'll be a coiling vine instead of putrid brine.

Chorus 3:
There's a way to be free -- dead -- like a memory 
Free from the tautology, oh gee oh me oh 
Bones ashes and dust everything will combust 
There's a way to be free -- dead -- like a memory 

Outro:
free -- dead -- like a memory 
free -- dead -- like a memory 

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I enjoyed the happy poppy sound while you are singing about putrid brine. Nice.
Jeff

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Nice pop rock song. Sounds good.

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jwnicholson wrote: Sat May 13, 2023 1:49 am I enjoyed the happy poppy sound while you are singing about putrid brine. Nice.
Jeff
:hihi: Contrasting lyrical substance and music form can be fun!

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weird original uplifting demented pop

Excellent! :clap:

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Genetic_Junk,
Thank you for the review! Now your first mix (the second mix isn't the same without the vocals): much of it is pretty bizarre. I think the chorus is the catchiest part: that part reminds me somewhat of Smashing Pumpkins (a compliment). Actually the verse sounds somewhat pumpkin-ish on second listen. I might have used a bit less less phaser (or similar) on the guitar, but otherwise the audio quality is quite good. Overall I think it is very good!
You can hear my original music at this link: https://www.soundclick.com/artist/defau ... dID=224436

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markkuja wrote: Sat May 13, 2023 4:39 pm Nice pop rock song. Sounds good.
Thanks! :)

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Your text is a bit apocalyptic, so it's not really suitable as an anthem
for the overweight. Well, there's the consolation for next life. :o

The song - structure, melody, implementation - I like it very much.
Very well done! :tu:
free mp3s + info: andy-enroe.de songs + weird stuff: enroe.de

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Initially, I wasn't sure what to make of this. Musically it's as you describe in the thread title (weird pop). I liked the change in intensity as the verses transition into the chorus. The lyrics are oddly macabre, and the line "No one knows my true form" carries more than a hint of menace, especially when contrasted with the cheerful, upbeat music.

Good work :)

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this is how all "farewell" songs should sound :band:;

encore!!
:ud:

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Frantz wrote: Wed May 17, 2023 2:36 am weird original uplifting demented pop

Excellent! :clap:
Thanks! Glad you enjoyed. :)

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aaron aardvark wrote: Wed May 17, 2023 5:03 am Genetic_Junk,
Thank you for the review! Now your first mix (the second mix isn't the same without the vocals): much of it is pretty bizarre. I think the chorus is the catchiest part: that part reminds me somewhat of Smashing Pumpkins (a compliment). Actually the verse sounds somewhat pumpkin-ish on second listen. I might have used a bit less less phaser (or similar) on the guitar, but otherwise the audio quality is quite good. Overall I think it is very good!
Thanks for your comments! Yeah I can understand how less phaser would be preferred. It does make the individual strums less articulate, but I enjoy the strange pitch shifting effect it provides.

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I love songs about bears :tu:

You are the man!

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I can't believe I haven't listened to this sooner.
Just my cup of tea. Love it.

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