The Depths of Dimentia by GWR

[greatwhiterhino]

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Here's another song I just finished. This track has a darker more industrial vibe than my last song.

It is in .wma format 128kbps. The file size is 3.24mb

http://tracksidetx.com/images/dimentia.wma (http://tracksidetx.com/images/dimentia.wma)

[Sickle]

First track I've heard in the Cafe since my return.



You got the bottom end grooving real nice, but I suggest some delicate EQ in the upper frequencies to even the spectrum out, cause as it stands, this track is too bottom heavy, but you odn't wanna kill too much of thwe lower freqencies; maybe try a side chai comperssor between the drums and excellent bassline..

It sounds like it needs to be...focused a wee bit more sharply..

But it's a cool piece, absolutely..

Welcome to the Cafe, btw. This used to be my home away from home, and with good stuff like this, it will be again reeeal soon..Feel free to share your stuff over at The Auditorium if you wanna as well; just click my sig and you'll find it easy enough.

ps: Don't be afraid of sticking some more distorrtion in there, either..

[greatwhiterhino]

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Thanks for the advice sickle. Tweaking the upper frequencies really helped this track out. You can here alot more of the background noise now.

Here's the new improved track.

http://tracksidetx.com/images/dimentia2.wma (http://tracksidetx.com/images/dimentia2.wma)