Hi, Goodbye
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- KVRist
- Topic Starter
- 56 posts since 26 Jan, 2006 from Chicago, IL
First time posting here, but anyways, just wanted to know what people think of this one
Hi, Goodbye
Hi Goodbye
I have just found out
That you will be here tonight
I wish I'd tell you the truth
But the devils bite my side
Hoping for a truce
For all my wandering thoughts
Just stay where you belong
And to the ground you'll halt
To the darkened corners
To the crying slaughters
These dreams will eat my soul alive
And then you say goodbye...
Hi, Goodbye
Hi Goodbye
I have just found out
That you will be here tonight
I wish I'd tell you the truth
But the devils bite my side
Hoping for a truce
For all my wandering thoughts
Just stay where you belong
And to the ground you'll halt
To the darkened corners
To the crying slaughters
These dreams will eat my soul alive
And then you say goodbye...
Last edited by Heckxx on Fri Oct 06, 2006 5:06 pm, edited 7 times in total.
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Daniel Pompougnac Daniel Pompougnac https://www.kvraudio.com/forum/memberlist.php?mode=viewprofile&u=51754
- KVRian
- 1432 posts since 15 Dec, 2004 from In a forest , France
just wanted to know what people think of this one
Daniel
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- KVRAF
- 4907 posts since 10 Aug, 2004 from Colorado Springs
Great production work. I would have liked a little more variation in the synth voices in the different non-chorus sections. But that is being kind of picky.
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- KVRist
- 116 posts since 4 Mar, 2006 from South of France
A strange atmospher, hypnotic sounds, and theses voices coming through the music... It'a very good job, Heckxx !
.:darl_chenu:.
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- KVRAF
- 3971 posts since 19 Apr, 2005 from Brissie
G'day Heckxx,
Great job, mate! I really like the song (including vocals), and the fact that I'd produce it differently is just a matter of taste, so well done!
Great job, mate! I really like the song (including vocals), and the fact that I'd produce it differently is just a matter of taste, so well done!
I've joined Lurkers Anonymous.
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- KVRist
- Topic Starter
- 56 posts since 26 Jan, 2006 from Chicago, IL
Thanks everyone...I updated the song alittle, and now I'm pretty sure my mix is final
...this is driving me nuts...but how come I can't get the link/URL tag to work right?
...this is driving me nuts...but how come I can't get the link/URL tag to work right?
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- KVRian
- 1278 posts since 11 Sep, 2006 from along the rivers edge in northern Ontario
brought back memories of Barkley James Harvest,
enjoyed!!
oh, and welcome
enjoyed!!
oh, and welcome
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- KVRist
- 329 posts since 20 Jun, 2006 from Japan
Great production and vocals!
for me it's rock not industrial tho.
for me it's rock not industrial tho.
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- KVRist
- Topic Starter
- 56 posts since 26 Jan, 2006 from Chicago, IL
Yeah, I couldn't quite figure out what genre to classify the song as. I didn't think just going "alternative rock" or any of those would be appropriate, since its so electronica-based. They don't have any electro-rock genres as i can tell