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sloworm · Post by **sloworm** » Fri Nov 17, 2006 5:31 am

Hi,

Track: Oister(mellow jello mix)
Objective: Some say you can make babies to this piece, I just want you to chill out. Nothing overly edited or fancy, just some smooth action.

Comments and listens please. Hopefully you will enjoy.

Click to listen to Oister

sloworm · Post by **sloworm** » Fri Nov 17, 2006 2:57 pm

bump.

sloworm · Post by **sloworm** » Sat Nov 18, 2006 12:59 am

bump.again.maybe one listen and comment.

bluedad · Post by **bluedad** » Sat Nov 18, 2006 1:25 am

this is a good tune to chill to. good ideas and sounds.
I think the mix could be a bit better, although I'm not the one who could tell you what it needs.
I know there's a bass line, but I wish it were a bit more prominent..maybe layered with another synth or compression would help.
still, I enjoyed the tune

OOBE · Post by **OOBE** » Sat Nov 18, 2006 3:46 am

Like bluedad already said, the bass needs a bit more beef...and the kick needs more thump...but just a bit more. Anyway, very enjoyable tune. It's calm and relaxing. The moods brings to my mind driving during a rainy day...just cruising along the road having a good time with no worries.

bobsled · Post by **bobsled** » Sat Nov 18, 2006 3:52 am

I like a mellow jello, thanks for the mood and the music.

sloworm · Post by **sloworm** » Sun Nov 19, 2006 10:22 am

thank you for the listens y'all.i am looking into bass personification.

polyslax · Post by **polyslax** » Sun Nov 19, 2006 11:19 am

Nice chill vibe sloworm, enjoyed it!

wavephonic · Post by **wavephonic** » Sun Nov 19, 2006 4:56 pm

interesting mood to this, like a jazzy blues thing, ya nice chill atmosphere,
liked the brush snare, perfect for this,
yep, good stuff

sloworm · Post by **sloworm** » Sun Nov 19, 2006 11:14 pm

thanks you guys, i appreciate your listen and feedback!

Anakha · Post by **Anakha** » Tue Nov 21, 2006 6:38 pm

Love it! Nice and moody song!
Thumbs up!

sloworm · Post by **sloworm** » Tue Nov 21, 2006 8:25 pm

thanks!!!

runagate · Post by **runagate** » Wed Nov 22, 2006 6:34 pm

What on earth is bass personification?

I like the weird incidental notes, the burbles and trippy ornamentations a lot, sloworm.

sloworm · Post by **sloworm** » Wed Nov 22, 2006 7:49 pm

bass personification= the attribution of a personal nature or character to inanimate objects or abstract notions, esp. as a rhetorical figure. To bring the bass beefier.

Thanks runa for the listen, been enjoying your music lately.

TimothyP: "Oister"