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Salwa2 · Post by **Salwa2** » Wed Jan 17, 2007 1:14 pm

It's called "S 21".

http://mp3.wp.pl/i/sciagnij?id=160338

Distorted guitar, sad synths, monotone drums... anyway, I think it's nice song. Mayby "nice" isn't best word..., let's say "decent".

simesf · Post by **simesf** » Wed Jan 17, 2007 1:48 pm

Get the vocals in sooner, and when the song alters tempo around 2 minutes lower the volume of what's been playing and up the volume of the new (simple) melody - or increase the volume as the phrase plays over - is it 1 or 2 bars? - so it feels like it's getting closer. Maybe less reverb on the vocals or less reverb in places & a bit more volume on the vocals overall. But that's just a personal opinion on what is a good song.

Salwa2 · Post by **Salwa2** » Wed Jan 17, 2007 4:13 pm

simesf wrote:Get the vocals in sooner, and when the song alters tempo around 2 minutes lower the volume of what's been playing and up the volume of the new (simple) melody - or increase the volume as the phrase plays over - is it 1 or 2 bars? - so it feels like it's getting closer. Maybe less reverb on the vocals or less reverb in places & a bit more volume on the vocals overall. But that's just a personal opinion on what is a good song.

Thanks a lot for comment. As I thought, vocals are always my weakest point..

silenthill2006 · Post by **silenthill2006** » Wed Jan 17, 2007 6:08 pm

Nice Track. However, vocal definately need work and need to stand out more with less reverb

Jazzyspoon · Post by **Jazzyspoon** » Sun Jan 21, 2007 8:14 am

expressive music writing. like the atmosphere, too. This would work well in a Wim Wenders film. Needs some boosting here and there, but overall very powerful songwriting. Like the guitar works decent textures. Thanks for sharing.

Salwa2 · Post by **Salwa2** » Tue Jan 30, 2007 1:13 pm

Thanks for all that nice words. You can find more of my songs here
http://www.kvraudio.com/forum/viewtopic ... highlight=

My latest song