Guys, I'm working on the last song of the Dark Ages series, named The Final Move.
http://www.broadjam.com/player/player.a ... 809_329734
Please, let me know what you think.
Best Regards, WilliamK
Work in progress - The final move
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It's good but I would like to hear the piano have a little looser feel to it. It plays a dominant role in the song and it is lacking a little soul. Some variation on the chord progressions might also help keep the listener keen to hear whats coming next. I haven't heard the rest of the series of songs but you have some interesting things going on with this song.WilliamK wrote:Guys, I'm working on the last song of the Dark Ages series, named The Final Move.
http://www.broadjam.com/player/player.a ... 809_329734
Please, let me know what you think.
Best Regards, WilliamK
Cheers,
dano
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