Your comments will be highly appreciated.
Updated 17 May, 2007.
C a r a v a n [updated]
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- KVRer
- Topic Starter
- 13 posts since 9 Feb, 2006 from Kolkata, India
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemus ... dID=170939
Your comments will be highly appreciated.
Updated 17 May, 2007.
Your comments will be highly appreciated.
Updated 17 May, 2007.
Last edited by kishoresen on Thu May 17, 2007 11:32 am, edited 2 times in total.
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- KVRian
- 892 posts since 14 Apr, 2004 from Maryland, USA
I saw Caravan and was immediately thinking of the old Duke Ellington tune, which obviously this is not.
I like the overall feel. My two main comments are that I'd like to seem some more harmonic variation: to just keep shifting between the same two harmonic centers throughout the entire 4+ minutes seems like too much without something to break it up. And I like the "ethnic" (for lack of a better term) percussion and would prefer to see it not get buried in the synth parts as it does sometimes.
Nice feel, very good sound quality. Overall, a winner, methinks.
DaveL
I like the overall feel. My two main comments are that I'd like to seem some more harmonic variation: to just keep shifting between the same two harmonic centers throughout the entire 4+ minutes seems like too much without something to break it up. And I like the "ethnic" (for lack of a better term) percussion and would prefer to see it not get buried in the synth parts as it does sometimes.
Nice feel, very good sound quality. Overall, a winner, methinks.
DaveL
You can twist perceptions, reality won't budge.
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- KVRer
- Topic Starter
- 13 posts since 9 Feb, 2006 from Kolkata, India
Hi DaveL, thank you very much for the listen and the comments. This particular composition does not have much harmonic variation to keep it simple. I love use of harmonies though, which are available in some of my other compositios. You might kindly give those a listen at http://www.soundclick.com/kishoresen . I shall definitely keep your tips in mind while refining it.DaveL60 wrote:I saw Caravan and was immediately thinking of the old Duke Ellington tune, which obviously this is not.
I like the overall feel. My two main comments are that I'd like to seem some more harmonic variation: to just keep shifting between the same two harmonic centers throughout the entire 4+ minutes seems like too much without something to break it up. And I like the "ethnic" (for lack of a better term) percussion and would prefer to see it not get buried in the synth parts as it does sometimes.
Nice feel, very good sound quality. Overall, a winner, methinks.
DaveL
Thanks and Regards
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fateamenabletochange fateamenabletochange https://www.kvraudio.com/forum/memberlist.php?mode=viewprofile&u=8029 - KVRAF
- 3059 posts since 13 Jul, 2003 from outer rim
my heavy metal 16yr old likes this too
combination of music styles seems to work well here
combination of music styles seems to work well here
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- KVRer
- Topic Starter
- 13 posts since 9 Feb, 2006 from Kolkata, India
Thanks to both of you fateamenabletochange.fateamenabletochange wrote:my heavy metal 16yr old likes this too
combination of music styles seems to work well here
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- KVRer
- Topic Starter
- 13 posts since 9 Feb, 2006 from Kolkata, India
The track is remixed and updated. Please check out the changes.
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fateamenabletochange fateamenabletochange https://www.kvraudio.com/forum/memberlist.php?mode=viewprofile&u=8029
- KVRAF
- 3059 posts since 13 Jul, 2003 from outer rim
yes this sounds good....some good stereo separation of various elements to my ears
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- KVRer
- Topic Starter
- 13 posts since 9 Feb, 2006 from Kolkata, India
Thanx fatefateamenabletochange wrote:yes this sounds good....some good stereo separation of various elements to my ears
