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Ichigo Kurosaki · Post by **Ichigo Kurosaki** » Mon Jul 16, 2007 8:31 pm

Hello everyone, I just got my keyboard wednesday, and I just created this song!

http://www.myspace.com/brokenfridayband

The name of the song is "Waiting"

I know I overpowered the string a little, but I was too lazy to upload the finalized copy.

It's for a female singe. Sorry fellas!

Meffy · Post by **Meffy** » Mon Jul 16, 2007 8:33 pm

Hi -- probably ought to be posted to Music Cafe, where you'll get comments and (we hope, constructive) criticism. Shall I move the thread over there?

Ichigo Kurosaki · Post by **Ichigo Kurosaki** » Mon Jul 16, 2007 8:41 pm

I couldn't find it! Please do so, thanks bro! I knew I seen it one time. Thanks

clueless · Post by **clueless** » Mon Jul 16, 2007 8:42 pm

yes, why not? Et bonne chance avec <<la>> singe.

Ichigo Kurosaki · Post by **Ichigo Kurosaki** » Mon Jul 16, 2007 8:53 pm

Thanks alot bro! Good thing my grandfather was part creol, and I took french!

clueless · Post by **clueless** » Mon Jul 16, 2007 8:55 pm

mine was an itinerant arab, and so did i.

Ichigo Kurosaki · Post by **Ichigo Kurosaki** » Mon Jul 16, 2007 9:02 pm

Sweet!

folderol · Post by **folderol** » Mon Jul 16, 2007 9:05 pm

download link doesn't seem to work

Ichigo Kurosaki · Post by **Ichigo Kurosaki** » Mon Jul 16, 2007 9:07 pm

Oh sorry, download is disabled at the moment.

clueless · Post by **clueless** » Mon Jul 16, 2007 9:10 pm

liked it, apart from the strings, and the basic drum track could do with a little spice.

Ichigo Kurosaki · Post by **Ichigo Kurosaki** » Mon Jul 16, 2007 9:13 pm

Thanks, any suggestions?

clueless · Post by **clueless** » Mon Jul 16, 2007 9:21 pm

the strings come in too regularly/frequently, rather than highlighting particular sections. Also, the sound itself is a little wooden/mechanical - no dynamics, variation, or development. The drums stick to the same pace and pattern throughout - an odd fill wouldn't hurt, or an underlay to flesh them out. Again, no variation or development. But I appreciate you "just created this song", so I'd assume a lot of what I'm hearing is rough guide-tracks?

Ichigo Kurosaki · Post by **Ichigo Kurosaki** » Mon Jul 16, 2007 9:25 pm

Ouch, thanks.

clueless · Post by **clueless** » Mon Jul 16, 2007 9:51 pm

i didn't mean it was shit, just perhaps a bit embryonic. so do somemore work on it.

"Waiting" A song I just created!