KVR Audio

uncle fausty · Post by **uncle fausty** » Wed Sep 12, 2007 3:31 am

First track from a one-off EP effort. I'm keen for feedback and advice on the composition and mix; what do you fine folks think of it?

Logical Progression

S.HUSH · Post by **S.HUSH** » Wed Sep 12, 2007 4:13 am

Hmmmmmmmm.......this is nice. It sounds ok throigh the phones but my guess is it might be a bit much on the low end in regards to the kick (s). I could be wrong but hearing it the way it is through my phones, usually when the kicks are this deep/busy, it ends up sounding muddy through regular speakers (which i don't have at the moment).

Composition wise, it is too short. The beginning is a bit repetitive so personally I would jump into that percussion break sooner and elongate the end melody.

....my 2 cents

uncle fausty · Post by **uncle fausty** » Wed Sep 12, 2007 3:11 pm

Thanks, folks! So, tone down the bass a touch, and maybe work the last segment with strings into something a little more developed...sounds good to me.

silenthill2006 · Post by **silenthill2006** » Wed Sep 12, 2007 3:37 pm

This is very nice sounding. However, I do agree with the bass comments. A longer intro would be nice as well. The track is just too short. I expected to hear more. But the good thing is a like what I hear for the most part. I imagine this track being in a shooter video game similar to Eihander on the original Playstation