broem broem
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- Narcissistic Messiah
- Topic Starter
- 4562 posts since 8 Apr, 2002 from https://soundcloud.com/remcoh
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- KVRer
- 11 posts since 7 Oct, 2006
the arrangement is nice, a song like this could easily become loopy and boring.
the drums are just a bit too programmed for my tastes. maybe try adding some ghost notes or shuffle or humanizing to give them some groove.
i could see this song being another stretch longer, too.
take my feedback with a grain of salt-- to each their own.
good song nonetheless
the drums are just a bit too programmed for my tastes. maybe try adding some ghost notes or shuffle or humanizing to give them some groove.
i could see this song being another stretch longer, too.
take my feedback with a grain of salt-- to each their own.
good song nonetheless
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- Banned
- 12368 posts since 30 Apr, 2002 from i might peeramid
sweet, has a nice upheaval feeling. sounds quite cafe to me.
you come and go, you come and go. amitabha neither a follower nor a leader be tagore "where roads are made i lose my way" where there is certainty, consideration is absent.
