New summer chill song "Musique de l'été" from Gucky

[Gucky]

In the monent we have a nice summer wheather in germany.
That gives me the idea for a summer chill song.

Here it is:
http://www.4shared.com/file/47789486/66 ... te_23.html

old versions:
http://www.4shared.com/file/47579508/87 ... lt_15.html
http://www.4shared.com/file/47447705/96 ... te_07.html

Please write me your comments.

[Gucky]

Bump.

[VicDiesel]

A summery tune indeed. Quite nice.

Cool: the acoustic guitar solo, strings, incidental noises.

Not cool: that rhythmic piano. Reminds me of the automatic chord generator in old eleectronic organs.

Victor.

[Gucky]

Hi VicDiesel,
many thanks for your comment.
The piano chord rhythm is a typical piano part for bossanova.
But to reduce the chord generator effect I made a new version where I
make three breaks with the rhythm. When my voice comes in the middle of the song I play now only chords without rhythm.
I hope it sounds better for you.

Here is the new version:
http://www.4shared.com/file/47579508/87 ... lt_15.html

Comments are welcome!

[VicDiesel]

The piano chord rhythm is a typical piano part for bossanova.

Yeah, but yours sounds a bit too quantized. Are the notes all the same velocity? Maybe play them by hand and only quantize a bit. Or vary the rhythm. Leave out some hits during the vocals, others during the guitar solo.

Still a nice tune.

Victor.

[Gucky]

Hi VicDiesel,
thanks for your tips again.
I did in my new version some little variations of the piano chord pattern.
I found out that I made a big mistake in the mastering. The ratio of the compressor was much too high for such style of music.
I changed to a lower ratio now and I think the piano sounds now more dynamic.

Here is the new version:
http://www.4shared.com/file/47789486/66 ... te_23.html

Comments are wanted.