Listen Up (Vocals)

[piperrox]

Hey i just created this song in fl studio. I ruptured my eardrum recently, and cannot hear if it sounds correct or not. could you help me out by giving it a listen and telling me if anything needs fixing?

Thank you

here is the url

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rJ_1rJnj9ck

[piperrox]

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