) and vocal melodies that remind of radiohead. A couple of little niggles. The transitions where you come to a complete stop seem to break up some of the energy of the tune. Some of the drumming, especially fills, sounded a bit synthetic to me. But all in all an enjoyable listen.
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- KVRian
- 543 posts since 16 Dec, 2003
I'm with seismic's comparison to radiohead. For me it's the guitar sounds, guitar playing, vocal stylings (e.g. mumbled lyrics ) and vocal melodies that remind of radiohead. A couple of little niggles. The transitions where you come to a complete stop seem to break up some of the energy of the tune. Some of the drumming, especially fills, sounded a bit synthetic to me. But all in all an enjoyable listen.
) and vocal melodies that remind of radiohead. A couple of little niggles. The transitions where you come to a complete stop seem to break up some of the energy of the tune. Some of the drumming, especially fills, sounded a bit synthetic to me. But all in all an enjoyable listen.-
- KVRian
- 950 posts since 30 Nov, 2004
guitars and drums are pretty good. the quiet guitar sounds very promising!
I think for it to be catchy you need to shorten the intro and get to the singing much faster. That's the point where you hook your listeners, the intro seems to distract me from what's really cool in the song.
I think for it to be catchy you need to shorten the intro and get to the singing much faster. That's the point where you hook your listeners, the intro seems to distract me from what's really cool in the song.
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- KVRAF
- 8072 posts since 12 Dec, 2003 from Canada
Fab stuff Junk, yup definitely speaks some Radiohead to me.
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- KVRAF
- Topic Starter
- 2991 posts since 22 Dec, 2004
Valid niggles. Thanks for listening and commenting.ecamburn wrote:I'm with seismic's comparison to radiohead. For me it's the guitar sounds, guitar playing, vocal stylings (e.g. mumbled lyrics
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- KVRAF
- Topic Starter
- 2991 posts since 22 Dec, 2004
I think you are right about the hook. I'm making music more myself than others. Certainly doesn't hurt to have people that enjoy the music though. Thanks for listening and commenting.Jesse Gorter wrote:guitars and drums are pretty good. the quiet guitar sounds very promising!
I think for it to be catchy you need to shorten the intro and get to the singing much faster. That's the point where you hook your listeners, the intro seems to distract me from what's really cool in the song.
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- KVRAF
- Topic Starter
- 2991 posts since 22 Dec, 2004
Thanks for listening and commenting polyslax.polyslax wrote:Fab stuff Junk, yup definitely speaks some Radiohead to me.
