Hi guys,
Just "finished" a new track and now i'm looking for some feedback.
so please let me know what you think!
https://soundcloud.com/maarten-pool/evil
Evil (feedback appreciated)
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- KVRist
- Topic Starter
- 252 posts since 8 Dec, 2013 from Groningen
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- KVRist
- Topic Starter
- 252 posts since 8 Dec, 2013 from Groningen
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- KVRist
- Topic Starter
- 252 posts since 8 Dec, 2013 from Groningen
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- KVRAF
- 5664 posts since 7 Feb, 2013
Honestly, I found this track very monotonous and not too pleasant to listen to. Maybe I just don't get this style (what is it? Dubstep?)
You may think you can fly ... but you better not try
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- KVRist
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- 252 posts since 8 Dec, 2013 from Groningen
yeah, i tried to add a melody but it just didn't fit the track. so i ended with just the screeches...recursive one wrote:Honestly, I found this track very monotonous and not too pleasant to listen to. Maybe I just don't get this style (what is it? Dubstep?)
and in case you don't get the style, try snorting a few lines of speed or coke and you'll get it;)
its called hardcore
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- KVRist
- Topic Starter
- 252 posts since 8 Dec, 2013 from Groningen
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- KVRAF
- 1986 posts since 29 Apr, 2010 from NYC
hmmm....
i didnt like it much up until 1:05...then i really liked it. i think theres a bit too much screeching in the beginning for me. my main issue is theres too much reverb on the whole thing. it sounds like its being played in the next station over in the subway. just my opinion but i feel youre loosing a lot of the power by dissipating it with the reverb. to me it sounds kind of hollow when it feels like it should be full and thumping.
i didnt like it much up until 1:05...then i really liked it. i think theres a bit too much screeching in the beginning for me. my main issue is theres too much reverb on the whole thing. it sounds like its being played in the next station over in the subway. just my opinion but i feel youre loosing a lot of the power by dissipating it with the reverb. to me it sounds kind of hollow when it feels like it should be full and thumping.
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- KVRist
- Topic Starter
- 252 posts since 8 Dec, 2013 from Groningen
Thnx for the feedback! i adjusted it and it does sounds better when its "fuller"! so thnx for that!chaosWyrM wrote:hmmm....
i didnt like it much up until 1:05...then i really liked it. i think theres a bit too much screeching in the beginning for me. my main issue is theres too much reverb on the whole thing. it sounds like its being played in the next station over in the subway. just my opinion but i feel youre loosing a lot of the power by dissipating it with the reverb. to me it sounds kind of hollow when it feels like it should be full and thumping.
anybody else some usefull tips?!
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- KVRAF
- 6325 posts since 18 Jul, 2008 from New York
I can tolerate about 30 seconds of this. Hardcore is not for me.
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- Banned
- 10196 posts since 12 Mar, 2012 from the Bavarian Alps to my feet and the globe around my head
What car racing game did you play during the recording? 
Well, for a jumpstyle song it's okay but some voices would fit into it...
Well, for a jumpstyle song it's okay but some voices would fit into it...
