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Hi my name is Pedro, i'm from Portugal.

I started producing since I was 14 years old, im 19 now, I live in lisbon (beautifull city btw ahah) but I started really serious some months ago. I did this track and I would really appreciate some feedback if possible.
Every singe comment wil be answered and commented back if asked!! I really hope I can create some connections and I want everyone to say what you really feel about my music! You say wherever you want I just want an honest and pure comment on my track. Say it sucks If needed ahah!

I hope my music fires something in you to make you feel like commenting my music!

My sincere and best regards to everyone!

https://soundcloud.com/mpr123-287920112/nameless

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My comment in the other thread still stands... DRUMS DRUMS DRUMS!!!
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Hi Pedro! Thanks for sharing your track. If Omniphonix's comment was about the lack of percussion in your track, I agree. I found the chord progressions and melodies pleasant enough, but I think your track would be that much better if you brought more percussion into the mix.

PS I agree about Lisbon being a beautiful city - I've visited twice and loved it!

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I really liked the feel of the ending. I can imagine a remix where that is the main part of the track with another lead over the top. It's quite gentle - could be a sweet song.

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Omniphonix wrote:My comment in the other thread still stands... DRUMS DRUMS DRUMS!!!
Thank you my friend ahah I will surely keep that in mind! :D

Have a good day!

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davidstiles wrote:Hi Pedro! Thanks for sharing your track. If Omniphonix's comment was about the lack of percussion in your track, I agree. I found the chord progressions and melodies pleasant enough, but I think your track would be that much better if you brought more percussion into the mix.

PS I agree about Lisbon being a beautiful city - I've visited twice and loved it!

Thanks my friend, I think I might be working a little more on the music, with all of your help on comments, I might have found a lot of mistakes and I wanna correct them. I really appreciate your comment it was realy helpfull.
I gave a view on your songs, in general some are not my style but are really really interesting and good! Keep up the good work my friend. The track that i liked the most was Together In The Dark, really chill this classic one!! Loved it!

Hope you have a great weekend sir!

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Richard deHove wrote:I really liked the feel of the ending. I can imagine a remix where that is the main part of the track with another lead over the top. It's quite gentle - could be a sweet song.
Thanks man!! If you want to try something new on it go ahead!!

Hope you have a great weekend!

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