New attempt, Asking for feedback and giving it back aswell!!
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- KVRer
- Topic Starter
- 18 posts since 27 Feb, 2016
Hi my name is Pedro, i'm from Portugal.
I started producing since I was 14 years old, im 19 now, I live in lisbon (beautifull city btw ahah) but I started really serious some months ago. I did this track and I would really appreciate some feedback if possible.
Every singe comment wil be answered and commented back if asked!! I really hope I can create some connections and I want everyone to say what you really feel about my music! You say wherever you want I just want an honest and pure comment on my track. Say it sucks If needed ahah!
I hope my music fires something in you to make you feel like commenting my music!
My sincere and best regards to everyone!
https://soundcloud.com/mpr123-287920112/nameless
I started producing since I was 14 years old, im 19 now, I live in lisbon (beautifull city btw ahah) but I started really serious some months ago. I did this track and I would really appreciate some feedback if possible.
Every singe comment wil be answered and commented back if asked!! I really hope I can create some connections and I want everyone to say what you really feel about my music! You say wherever you want I just want an honest and pure comment on my track. Say it sucks If needed ahah!
I hope my music fires something in you to make you feel like commenting my music!
My sincere and best regards to everyone!
https://soundcloud.com/mpr123-287920112/nameless
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- KVRist
- 460 posts since 14 Mar, 2004 from Colorado, USA
My comment in the other thread still stands... DRUMS DRUMS DRUMS!!!
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- KVRian
- 645 posts since 4 Nov, 2013 from Vancouver, Canada
Hi Pedro! Thanks for sharing your track. If Omniphonix's comment was about the lack of percussion in your track, I agree. I found the chord progressions and melodies pleasant enough, but I think your track would be that much better if you brought more percussion into the mix.
PS I agree about Lisbon being a beautiful city - I've visited twice and loved it!
PS I agree about Lisbon being a beautiful city - I've visited twice and loved it!
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Richard deHove Richard deHove https://www.kvraudio.com/forum/memberlist.php?mode=viewprofile&u=376689
- KVRist
- 395 posts since 23 Mar, 2016
I really liked the feel of the ending. I can imagine a remix where that is the main part of the track with another lead over the top. It's quite gentle - could be a sweet song.
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My music: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UC-XdT2 ... 55tGwjEDUA
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- KVRer
- Topic Starter
- 18 posts since 27 Feb, 2016
davidstiles wrote:Hi Pedro! Thanks for sharing your track. If Omniphonix's comment was about the lack of percussion in your track, I agree. I found the chord progressions and melodies pleasant enough, but I think your track would be that much better if you brought more percussion into the mix.
PS I agree about Lisbon being a beautiful city - I've visited twice and loved it!
Thanks my friend, I think I might be working a little more on the music, with all of your help on comments, I might have found a lot of mistakes and I wanna correct them. I really appreciate your comment it was realy helpfull.
I gave a view on your songs, in general some are not my style but are really really interesting and good! Keep up the good work my friend. The track that i liked the most was Together In The Dark, really chill this classic one!! Loved it!
Hope you have a great weekend sir!
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- KVRer
- Topic Starter
- 18 posts since 27 Feb, 2016
Thanks man!! If you want to try something new on it go ahead!!Richard deHove wrote:I really liked the feel of the ending. I can imagine a remix where that is the main part of the track with another lead over the top. It's quite gentle - could be a sweet song.
Hope you have a great weekend!