Hello in There (cover) -- critique welcome
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- KVRAF
- Topic Starter
- 2215 posts since 27 Jan, 2011
Hi all,
This is pretty close to done but I'd still welcome any constructive comments about how the mix / arrangement might be improved.
https://soundcloud.com/st-josephs-socia ... -sept-2016
If you comment, please mention what you listened to it on (e.g. cans, monitors, phone speaker etc)
Also note that the underlying WAV file, which is closest to what I'd intended, is downloadable from Soundcloud.
(Finally, sorry, but the totally random track which SoundCloud plays after this has nothing to do with me. Anyone know how to prevent this?)
This is pretty close to done but I'd still welcome any constructive comments about how the mix / arrangement might be improved.
https://soundcloud.com/st-josephs-socia ... -sept-2016
If you comment, please mention what you listened to it on (e.g. cans, monitors, phone speaker etc)
Also note that the underlying WAV file, which is closest to what I'd intended, is downloadable from Soundcloud.
(Finally, sorry, but the totally random track which SoundCloud plays after this has nothing to do with me. Anyone know how to prevent this?)
Last edited by lingyai on Fri Sep 16, 2016 12:44 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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thecontrolcentre thecontrolcentre https://www.kvraudio.com/forum/memberlist.php?mode=viewprofile&u=76240
- KVRAF
- 35189 posts since 27 Jul, 2005 from the wilds of wanny
Sounds great listening on my phone speaker just now. Will grab the wav for sure. Nice work. I might drop the vocal back a little, and sort out the couple of tuning issues, but no biggie.
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- KVRAF
- Topic Starter
- 2215 posts since 27 Jan, 2011
Thanks for listening and feeding back. Would you be able to specify where the tuning issues arise? My ears aren't the best (otherwise I'd not have let them through to begin with)thecontrolcentre wrote:Sounds great listening on my phone speaker just now. Will grab the wav for sure. Nice work. I might drop the vocal back a little, and sort out the couple of tuning issues, but no biggie.
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thecontrolcentre thecontrolcentre https://www.kvraudio.com/forum/memberlist.php?mode=viewprofile&u=76240
- KVRAF
- 35189 posts since 27 Jul, 2005 from the wilds of wanny
The vocal in the chorus' is a little out of tune ... it's not terrible, just a bit flat in places.lingyai wrote:Thanks for listening and feeding back. Would you be able to specify where the tuning issues arise? My ears aren't the best (otherwise I'd not have let them through to begin with)thecontrolcentre wrote:Sounds great listening on my phone speaker just now. Will grab the wav for sure. Nice work. I might drop the vocal back a little, and sort out the couple of tuning issues, but no biggie.
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- KVRAF
- Topic Starter
- 2215 posts since 27 Jan, 2011
Cheers.
Anyone else?
Anyone else?