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Hi all,

This is pretty close to done but I'd still welcome any constructive comments about how the mix / arrangement might be improved.

https://soundcloud.com/st-josephs-socia ... -sept-2016


If you comment, please mention what you listened to it on (e.g. cans, monitors, phone speaker etc)

Also note that the underlying WAV file, which is closest to what I'd intended, is downloadable from Soundcloud.

(Finally, sorry, but the totally random track which SoundCloud plays after this has nothing to do with me. Anyone know how to prevent this?)
Last edited by lingyai on Fri Sep 16, 2016 12:44 pm, edited 1 time in total.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3tDj_Van ... uNbgY-4qFK

I'm not the Messiah. I'm not the Messiah!

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Sounds great listening on my phone speaker just now. Will grab the wav for sure. Nice work. I might drop the vocal back a little, and sort out the couple of tuning issues, but no biggie.

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thecontrolcentre wrote:Sounds great listening on my phone speaker just now. Will grab the wav for sure. Nice work. I might drop the vocal back a little, and sort out the couple of tuning issues, but no biggie.
Thanks for listening and feeding back. Would you be able to specify where the tuning issues arise? My ears aren't the best (otherwise I'd not have let them through to begin with)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3tDj_Van ... uNbgY-4qFK

I'm not the Messiah. I'm not the Messiah!

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lingyai wrote:
thecontrolcentre wrote:Sounds great listening on my phone speaker just now. Will grab the wav for sure. Nice work. I might drop the vocal back a little, and sort out the couple of tuning issues, but no biggie.
Thanks for listening and feeding back. Would you be able to specify where the tuning issues arise? My ears aren't the best (otherwise I'd not have let them through to begin with)
The vocal in the chorus' is a little out of tune ... it's not terrible, just a bit flat in places.

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Cheers.

Anyone else?
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3tDj_Van ... uNbgY-4qFK

I'm not the Messiah. I'm not the Messiah!

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