Hello. I share with You piano track. Please, let me know what do you think about. Best regards!
https://youtu.be/b0fwKEEEnoY
Niezapomniana | piano track | YT
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- KVRer
- Topic Starter
- 11 posts since 11 Mar, 2015
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- KVRian
- 884 posts since 3 Jan, 2016
I think you started out OK and slowly developed a basic theme but you then kind of hopped around to different musical ideas that lacked cohesion with that theme. This confuses the listener instead of creating interest. You don't want just keep repeating the same idea but the trick is to lead the listener on a musical journey that they can understand and enjoy. This can be easier listening or more difficult depending on ones style.
This reminds me somewhat of my first efforts at composing on the piano many years ago. Just keep working at it and eventually things will click in. You do have talent!
This reminds me somewhat of my first efforts at composing on the piano many years ago. Just keep working at it and eventually things will click in. You do have talent!
