Funky Breaks Tune : Highwave
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- KVRist
- Topic Starter
- 347 posts since 3 Aug, 2004 from Galway,Ireland
This is the first mix of this tune. So any comments will likely affect it's outcome.
If anybody has ideas or would like to add to it, I'd be delighted.
http://www.eclecticmeme.com/audio/techbot-highwave.mp3
If anybody has ideas or would like to add to it, I'd be delighted.
http://www.eclecticmeme.com/audio/techbot-highwave.mp3
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- KVRAF
- 2093 posts since 19 Jun, 2003 from UTM 18 317254E 4295335N (WGS84/NAD83)
Groovy. I think you need to either shorten up the intro and add/remove some elements more often during the stanzas in the first 2/3 of the song. Some parts get a little repetitive. But the beats are great and I like the eclectic mix of stuff. If you had a vocal on it, the repetition wouldn't be noticeable.
Nice positive mood - this would go well with beer!
Nice positive mood - this would go well with beer!
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- KVRist
- Topic Starter
- 347 posts since 3 Aug, 2004 from Galway,Ireland
Absolutely . Thank You" for the quick response.
This is why I posted it. I can’t sing and I’d rather not resort to samplebanks. So if anyone is up to the challenge . I can edit extraneous sounds out once I have a vocal to work with.
It doesn't have to be a vocal with complete lyrics. Vocal fx would be cool. All I ask is that they are vocals recorded specifically for this tune.
This is why I posted it. I can’t sing and I’d rather not resort to samplebanks. So if anyone is up to the challenge . I can edit extraneous sounds out once I have a vocal to work with.
It doesn't have to be a vocal with complete lyrics. Vocal fx would be cool. All I ask is that they are vocals recorded specifically for this tune.
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- KVRist
- 101 posts since 2 May, 2004
I agree with these comments; and ... I like the drums.You™ wrote:Groovy. I think you need to either shorten up the intro and add/remove some elements more often during the stanzas in the first 2/3 of the song. Some parts get a little repetitive. But the beats are great and I like the eclectic mix of stuff. If you had a vocal on it, the repetition wouldn't be noticeable.
Nice positive mood - this would go well with beer!
"Don't fear mistakes. There are none." - Miles Davis
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- KVRist
- 270 posts since 15 Jun, 2004 from Munic
REALLY COOL, it's just fun right as I like it,
So, we (others and I) are actually working on a presentation for a contest, am I allowed to get it in?
So, we (others and I) are actually working on a presentation for a contest, am I allowed to get it in?
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- KVRist
- 214 posts since 15 Oct, 2002 from Goettingen, Planet Earth
Very funky, excellent drum work
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- KVRist
- Topic Starter
- 347 posts since 3 Aug, 2004 from Galway,Ireland
Hi Thanks for the repsonse guys.
Cypher: Glad your daughter liked it .
As for the piano. It's probably more dominant at the moment than it should be. But I'm hoping some vocals will enable me to put a few of the sounds more to the back.
As for the drums, they're samples so I can't really take credit for em. But nonetheless I think there is a nice funky tune here dying to get out.
Hey it doesn't even have to be a vocal.I'm up for anything. I could finish it by myself but I'm more into a collab with this one. So anything goes.
If I don't get a response, I'll do another edit and tidy things up a bit, but I thought peeps would prefer working with a raw production which would leave more avenues for change. (I think)
Luv
Cypher: Glad your daughter liked it .
As for the piano. It's probably more dominant at the moment than it should be. But I'm hoping some vocals will enable me to put a few of the sounds more to the back.
As for the drums, they're samples so I can't really take credit for em. But nonetheless I think there is a nice funky tune here dying to get out.
Hey it doesn't even have to be a vocal.I'm up for anything. I could finish it by myself but I'm more into a collab with this one. So anything goes.
If I don't get a response, I'll do another edit and tidy things up a bit, but I thought peeps would prefer working with a raw production which would leave more avenues for change. (I think)
Luv