Stream of Consciousness = Odd Lyrics?

[fjell_strom]

Well, let me brief you. Back in March, I did some "experiments" in ad lib-ing entire songs: Words and music completely on the fly. Some of the results were crazy and some were forgettable. Some were immediately classic gravy!

The music for this tune is not ad-libbed but the lyrics were written in a complete non-stop flow and were very stream-of-consciousness as my mind was reeling from the afternoon I'd just had.

Does anyone dig it? Any aspects of it?

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http://www.soundclick.com/bands/songInf ... ID=2749107

Dustin

[bluedad]

I dig it..warm and personal thoughts.
melody and sparse arrangement convey a reflective mood.

[Lawnmower Of The Damned]

The lyrics came out pretty well considering that they were written like that. The electric piano could have sounded better (Not the playing, just the tone), but the vocals had a really nice character to them. Good stuff.