This is a serious fuckaround of a song but everyone I've shown it to seems to like it, plus I like the weird sound I got with it. The song was made in around six or so hours during the night and the guitar and vocals (me talking near the end and doing ..emoish? - I guess - screams for fun.. I did death growls in another song so I thought why not go on the other end of the screaming spectrum but it was around 4am and I live in a flat so I tried to do them quietly) were recorded on a laptop microphone that's embedded in the keyboard and catches more static than anything within the reaches of human comprehension. The vocals were just a muck around, they were ad-libbed as I was too lazy to write something. I might rerecord them if I get bothered.
The track itself is very lo-fi, though it's due to to the actual equipment recorded on as well I actually liked the sound as it gives it a bit of an extra "spooky" feeling. It's a down-tempo/trip-hop track with a mixture of folk guitar playing, a bunch of weird percussive elements and screwed up vocals.
The track is still a work in progress and I might rework it a fair bit but I was just looking for commentary on it as it is an odd piece.
tl;dr
Link:
Gloam Revisited(demo) by Lined with Asbestos
http://www.4shared.com/file/58591033/7d ... sited.html (http://www.4shared.com/file/58591033/7db054a8/LinedwithAsbestos-GloamRevisited.html)
have a listen and do criticise it if you can. Even a simple, "it's shit," is great.