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funky lime · Post by **funky lime** » Sun Jul 17, 2011 2:08 am

This is a song about someone. A heavy sort of prog rock; as far as the lyrics, I'm sure the grammar is rubbish but hopefully the ideas are there.

http://halfwalk.bandcamp.com/track/much ... ni-surudoi

lyrics:
taiyō no yōna kami no shōjo
majo no me o motsu josei
tokasu! ase! seieki! yokubō!
watashi no shita wa kyōi o hatarakaseru koto ga dekiru
watashi ni anata karada o ataeru
tokasu! ase! seieki! yokubō!
watashi wa yuka ni seikō shite mimashou
anata no karada no furue
shikashi anata wa osorete inai
watashi wa anata o gyakutai se
tokasu! ase! seieki! yokubō!

muchi no yō ni surudoi
mangetsu no kon'ya no shita de mimashou fakku!
fakku! fakku! fakku!

kit:
VarietyOfSound epicVerb
de la Mancha dlM-sixtyfive a
TbT PreAMP_TGR-18
AdmiralQuality NaiveLPF
Nick Crow 77_8505_Lead
Buzzroom octBUZ
Nomad Factory Magnetic, British NEQ-1972, MCL-2264, BT Oilcan Echo, BT Valve Driver, Liquid Phase II
ArcDev ET-301
Aradaz Amp_Crunch, Amp_White
Kjaerhus Classic Delay
Heptode Deep Crunch, Heavy Tone
AcmeBarGig Shred, Mimic Cabs
TAL DUB-II

Laguna Rising · Post by **Laguna Rising** » Sun Jul 17, 2011 8:36 am

Nice and weird, it has a realistic live sound, uncommon vocals and melodies.
A long, adventurous prog-rock journey your way.
It was interesting and enjoyable to listen to.

Cheers

seismic1 · Post by **seismic1** » Sun Jul 17, 2011 11:19 am

I am again picking up a Doors vibe from this! Definitely reminiscent of parts of "The End". This is not a bad thing BTW.

I like this. I would have preferred a slightly clearer mix, but I think you had something else in mind here.

Good track.

bluedad · Post by **bluedad** » Sun Jul 17, 2011 3:38 pm

Creative and interesting! I too, would have preferred a clearer mix, there's a lot going on that seems too muddied. Sometimes I hesitate to say things like that, because so often it might just be the way the artist wanted it to be..

tenshin111 · Post by **tenshin111** » Sun Jul 17, 2011 4:15 pm

Very enjoyable proggy trip. Unique sound and vibe. Well done!

funky lime · Post by **funky lime** » Thu Jul 21, 2011 6:50 pm

@Laguna: thanks, the vocal style is a new thing for me. usually i don't sing, and when I do it's in a too-literal style and in boring english.

@Seismic1: maybe i should listen to the doors! never really got into them but for a couple tracks back in the day.

@Bluedad: yes this mix was dirty on purpose, but now when i listen back to it, it does seem a bit too muddy, especially the vocals. as far as the muddiness of guitars, that is on purpose: to disguise my second-rate playing!

@Tenshin111: thank you!

now, back to the studio...!

insert-name-here · Post by **insert-name-here** » Thu Jul 21, 2011 7:17 pm

cool sounds, cool vocals, prog rock on!

heavy progressive rock adventure