New chillout song "Desire" ; Comments wanted :-)
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- KVRAF
- Topic Starter
- 1905 posts since 26 Sep, 2004
Today I made a new chillout song called "Desire".
Here it is:
new version:
http://soundcloud.com/musikus/desire-version-910
old version:
http://soundcloud.com/musikus/desire
Comments are very welcome!
Here it is:
new version:
http://soundcloud.com/musikus/desire-version-910
old version:
http://soundcloud.com/musikus/desire
Comments are very welcome!
Last edited by Gucky on Thu Nov 22, 2012 12:29 pm, edited 2 times in total.
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- KVRist
- 83 posts since 19 May, 2012
Well it's chill out alright Although I would welcome a little variation in tonal Centre and drums too. Further it sounds fine to me.
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- KVRAF
- Topic Starter
- 1905 posts since 26 Sep, 2004
Hi megalodonnl,
many thanks for your hint.
It motivated my to make a new version.
I added a accouctic guitar and I made some little changes on the drums.
Here is the new version:
http://soundcloud.com/musikus/desire
Do you think that the new version is better?I
many thanks for your hint.
It motivated my to make a new version.
I added a accouctic guitar and I made some little changes on the drums.
Here is the new version:
http://soundcloud.com/musikus/desire
Do you think that the new version is better?I
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- KVRist
- 83 posts since 19 May, 2012
Well, haven't been here till now. I think u also might wanna look into better drum sounds cause these sound a bit cheap. I do like the congas. What I meant in previous post was tonal changes added to the composition itself, although in lounge /chillout music u can perhaps get away with just using one progression, I prefer more since the whole song becomes more versatile. But I like the general mood of the song;peaceful. Just what humanity needs in these days - peace and upliftment.
- Banned
- 10196 posts since 12 Mar, 2012 from the Bavarian Alps to my feet and the globe around my head
The pad is nice, but the beat could be a bit louder and with more variation...
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- KVRAF
- Topic Starter
- 1905 posts since 26 Sep, 2004
Today I made a new version of the song.
I take another comp for the stereo bus. It is now the Native instruments VC 2a
I made some little changes with the drum groove and I added a new groove at 5:20.
Here it is:
http://soundcloud.com/musikus/desire-version-910
Hope you like it.
It is better now?
I am very interested in your opinion!
I take another comp for the stereo bus. It is now the Native instruments VC 2a
I made some little changes with the drum groove and I added a new groove at 5:20.
Here it is:
http://soundcloud.com/musikus/desire-version-910
Hope you like it.
It is better now?
I am very interested in your opinion!
- KVRAF
- 5540 posts since 5 Aug, 2006 from UK - The Mudway Towns
Very recognisable as your work, but smoother and much more sophisticated than your early work.
It wasn't me! (well, actually, it probably was) - apparently now an 'elderly' so maybe I forgot!