Lose control (Experimental) (updated version)
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- KVRist
- Topic Starter
- 252 posts since 8 Dec, 2013 from Groningen
Hi Guys,
made a new track.
I like to think that it's pretty awesome, but your opinion/feedback/tips are more than welcome!
https://soundcloud.com/maarten-pool/lose-control
made a new track.
I like to think that it's pretty awesome, but your opinion/feedback/tips are more than welcome!
https://soundcloud.com/maarten-pool/lose-control
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- KVRAF
- 6113 posts since 7 Jan, 2005 from Corporate States of America
Did you mean to say "loose" as in "not tight", or "lose" as in "lost"?
I took a listen, but I think my commentary mightn't be appropriate, since I'm not into this style. Some neat sounds and I'm glad to see a change up in structure at the ⅓ mark, since this genre tends to be boringly repetitive to my tastes. But that's me and my taste
Cheers!
I took a listen, but I think my commentary mightn't be appropriate, since I'm not into this style. Some neat sounds and I'm glad to see a change up in structure at the ⅓ mark, since this genre tends to be boringly repetitive to my tastes. But that's me and my taste
Cheers!
- dysamoria.com
my music @ SoundCloud
my music @ SoundCloud
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- KVRist
- Topic Starter
- 252 posts since 8 Dec, 2013 from Groningen
lol, I meant "lose control":PJace-BeOS wrote:Did you mean to say "loose" as in "not tight", or "lose" as in "lost"?
I took a listen, but I think my commentary mightn't be appropriate, since I'm not into this style. Some neat sounds and I'm glad to see a change up in structure at the ⅓ mark, since this genre tends to be boringly repetitive to my tastes. But that's me and my taste
Cheers!
English is not my native language as you can see;)
but yeah, i tried to do some different rhythms and such to keep it interesting. imo it doesn't really get repetitive or boring. atleast i tried to avoid that;)
thnx for the response!
- KVRAF
- 6113 posts since 7 Jan, 2005 from Corporate States of America
Welcome to the inconsistency of the English language. I'm glad I grew up with it, or I would never have learned well enough to communicate. As is, my spelling sucks and I'm only getting some words memorized finally at age 38.
I'm a monolingual, so you're doing better than me by just communicating in more than one language. Cheers!
I'm a monolingual, so you're doing better than me by just communicating in more than one language. Cheers!
- dysamoria.com
my music @ SoundCloud
my music @ SoundCloud
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- KVRist
- Topic Starter
- 252 posts since 8 Dec, 2013 from Groningen
lol, yeah i can speak and write english pretty well but i also have dyslexia so there are some faults sometimes;)Jace-BeOS wrote: Welcome to the inconsistency of the English language. I'm glad I grew up with it, or I would never have learned well enough to communicate. As is, my spelling sucks and I'm only getting some words memorized finally at age 38.
I'm a monolingual, so you're doing better than me by just communicating in more than one language. Cheers!
but back to the track...
who got some more feedback for me?!
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- KVRist
- Topic Starter
- 252 posts since 8 Dec, 2013 from Groningen
thnx! it was made for those kinda purposes;)Brundle wrote:could imagine this being played in a venue at 4am and everyone going for it. very nice
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- KVRist
- Topic Starter
- 252 posts since 8 Dec, 2013 from Groningen
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- KVRist
- Topic Starter
- 252 posts since 8 Dec, 2013 from Groningen
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- KVRist
- Topic Starter
- 252 posts since 8 Dec, 2013 from Groningen
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- KVRist
- Topic Starter
- 252 posts since 8 Dec, 2013 from Groningen
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- KVRist
- Topic Starter
- 252 posts since 8 Dec, 2013 from Groningen
True, but yet it isn't.V0RT3X wrote:Almost sounds like hardstyle.
do you have some tips or feedback maybe?!
i can't believe no one has anything to criticize.
i want points to work on!!!
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- KVRist
- Topic Starter
- 252 posts since 8 Dec, 2013 from Groningen
maybe now some people willing to give me some feedback?!