Hello, this is my new tune - Joyriding in the Years - ( Living in the Years 2 ).Originally a gospeltune
for the piano . I tried something I have never done before - a happy summer piece. Allthough it is better
suited for the piano, I gave it go and put in two new parts. It is a pity that on my laptopmonitor the bass comes up a bit to much, but on my headphones and on my studiomonitors it sounds right to my ears.
Thanks again for listening. The pianoversion is on my soundcloudsite too ( Living in the Years )
https://soundcloud.com/fergusonbbb/livi ... he-years-2
Joyriding in the Years
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- KVRist
- Topic Starter
- 75 posts since 2 Jan, 2010
- KVRAF
- 6326 posts since 18 Jul, 2008 from New York
The music is strong. I think the arrangement could be developed to use more varied instrumentation. As it stands now, I would call it a diamond in the rough.
I suggest going easier on the brickwall limiter. It's too loud.
Nice work.
I suggest going easier on the brickwall limiter. It's too loud.
Nice work.
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- KVRist
- Topic Starter
- 75 posts since 2 Jan, 2010
Again thank you for your feedback. I think these are very good suggestions, because I´m still learning
how to hold the mix together and to control the reverb and delay better- I´m not expierienced enough.
For the instrumentaion your right. This is weak part in my tracks. The sound is always a bit samey.
So I have much to to. Cheers.
how to hold the mix together and to control the reverb and delay better- I´m not expierienced enough.
For the instrumentaion your right. This is weak part in my tracks. The sound is always a bit samey.
So I have much to to. Cheers.