Asking for a review on my track

[Hawken]

Hey,

So i made my first track (dont be discouraged yet please) wanted others thought on it.
I dont know where im at after my first 5 months
(3 of them been alot procastinating and giving up, heh -remember the feeling?)

I dont feel i can judge my own track versus others at my experience level (cause im so new in this), hoping maybe you can be the judge for it?

Song: https://soundcloud.com/user-301923379/wraps/s-1enO9
Can someone also tell me what genre this is?

Thanks in advance,

Hawken.-

[insert-name-here]

At 5 months its pretty good
dont worry about genre, keep making what you make
the rewards can be very high, so can be the frustration

[JerGoertz]

A little repetitive, but you've got some interesting elements working together. Keep it up!

[layzer]

mix is good, arangement is on the right track with pauses and change ups. perhaps extend it and add an endiing?

[Jesse Gorter]

it's dancy ish.

It's clearly a beginner tune, but better than most beginners. The arrangement is quite good.
I would work on your melodic skills next, try to really tell a story