It tastes like cyanide (Vocal track)

[ivanj]

Our latest and our first vocal track, please give us your feedback, so we can improve for the next one. Thanks

https://soundcloud.com/farloopers/cyanide

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tKxqxHPdOaI

[Frantz]

I like that it's a fully developed song with heavy 80s influences. There are tasty keyboard leads throughout.

There are mix issues. It sounds fuzzy, there is not enough high end, it's over compressed, and there's too much reverb on some parts. It sounds like I'm listening to this on a boom box in a bathroom. You should strive for a clearer mix next time.

The vocals are front and center with the singer belting really passionately, maybe too passionately. I would suggest a more subtle, restrained approach next time.

Good job. I appreciate real effort went into this.

[ivanj]

Thanks Frantz for your tips, we´ll try to make a cleaner master next time About the singer he is just too passionately hahaha, we'll go for a different approach on our next vocal track.