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aaron aardvark · Post by **aaron aardvark** » Mon Jul 23, 2018 4:36 am

I added 2 songs to my music website, though I think you would be most interested in the song on top: "So Alive He Is", it has more synths. The next song down is more guitar oriented, is called "The Night of the Revelation". Please tell me how you like the music, how it can be improved, and I can return the favor if you wish (leave me a link). Here is my link:

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/default ... dID=224436

wagtunes · Post by **wagtunes** » Mon Jul 23, 2018 9:23 am

My Feedback "So Alive He Is"

Music - 8.5
Instruments - 8.5
Performance - 9.5
Mix - 10

Overall - 9.125

Comments: Volume a little low but that's minor. Vocals sound like B 52s. Definitely hear 80s on this one. Nice clean mix. Well done.

wagtunes · Post by **wagtunes** » Mon Jul 23, 2018 9:30 am

My Feedback "The Night Of The Revelation"

Music - 7.5
Instruments - 8.5
Performance - 9
Mix - 8

Overall - 8.25

Comments: Nice hard rocker. Vocals had me cracking up a bit. Mix a little uneven on this one. Vocal maybe too much reverb. Lead guitar a little dry. Maybe a touch of reverb or delay. But overall, well done.

My stuff? Just check out "The Wagtunes Corner" in Music Cafe. Pick a page out of it. Doesn't matter. Have about 130 songs posted. Just let me know which one you listened to. Try not to cringe at the vocals.

aaron aardvark · Post by **aaron aardvark** » Tue Jul 24, 2018 4:09 am

wagtunes,
Thank you for the reviews! I appreciate it. I will now check out your music.

Frantz · Post by **Frantz** » Thu Jul 26, 2018 11:04 pm

I listened to "So Alive He Is." The backing track has an early 80s sound with good rhythmic interplay. The song structure is fairly minimal intro-verse-chorus-verse-chorus. It could benefit from a different sounding section that would provide a change of pace. I think the mix is bass heavy. The vocals are in your usual unrestrained style which I have grown accustomed too.

A good effort overall.

Chemik · Post by **Chemik** » Fri Jul 27, 2018 11:40 am

Just listened to So Alive He Is. I really like your vocals. Reminds me of à;GRUMH (like the song Ha People). Something feels like it is missing in the music that I can't put my finger on. More reverb on the drums? More variety in the drum pattern? I like the song though.

aaron aardvark · Post by **aaron aardvark** » Sat Jul 28, 2018 2:28 am

Frantz & Chemik,
Thank you for reviewing my music! I will now seek out your music.

2 songs to review! Promise to return the favor. New July 22nd!