[melodic/downtempo] eye heart knot - looking for advice

[GeneralFuzz]

Hi,

I'm currently struggling with how I feel about this song: http://generalfuzz.com/num5/eye%20heart%20knot.mp3

It's a precursor to a second song which could be really be fine by itself. What do you think of this song? Does it draw you in? What might you change about it? Add new instruments/take out parts/etc?

I'm trying to figure out if I should include it on my next album (which is near finished).

Thanks for any feedback! I really appreciate it.

[GeneralFuzz]

(solicitous) bump

[sloworm]

i like the solemn, lulling vibe. good melodies, nice loungey beat! a good listen to kinda dissapear into. dunno if it is the encoding, but the mix could be touched up, to kinda get it out of the fog.

[GeneralFuzz]

Thanks for the feedback. The mix isn't all that good - I won't dedicate the time to polish it up until I'm satisfied with the composition of the song.