Feedback on Chill Trance song?

[vata44]

Hello, we are looking for technical and creative feedback on our chill trance song. Please be honest and bold in your critique, we want to make it the best we can.

Thank you.

http://www.sonicoctave.com/forest/vaisn ... eah%5d.mp3

[osiris]

Good song. Leah's got a great voice and I like the lyrics.
I don't like the weird little background snare rolls.
I'm thinking the bassline sounds more rock and roll or pop than trance. It's good, but I think you should experiment with different ones.
Other than that, very nice.

[Deca Studios]

Good stuff

[kevherb]

nice vibe going on... chilled