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Here's a fairly new track by me. I'm going to do an edit of it sometime in the near future and modify couple of parts in the song. Anyway, here's the track:
http://www.krakulandia.info/Music/mmc/kraku/Aflecht%20-%20Be autiful%20Things.mp3 All feedback is welcome. ---- Misspellers of the world, unit! http://aflecht.blogspot.com/ http://www.youtube.com/aflecht http://www.youtube.com/krakulandia |
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| ^ | Joined: 13 Oct 2003 Member: #9660 Location: Kallio, Helsinki, Finland, Earth | ||
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This is the most fully developed song out of the last three you have posted. Of those three, I like it the best. The chorus works well.
If you are looking for constructive criticism, this track could use some more aggression: louder vocals and dynamic drum fills. In general, your material is very sparse. I think adding chord pads would help fill out your sound. |
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| ^ | Joined: 18 Jul 2008 Member: #185137 Location: New York | ||
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i havent heard your other tracks, but i think this one sounds pretty good myself. i like how its subtle yet still has an edginess to it. i dont mind it sounding a bit sparse...in fact i think if you filled it in you run the risk of loosing the kind of tense lonely feel it has. just my opinion though. |
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| ^ | Joined: 28 Apr 2010 Member: #230748 | ||
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I enjoyed it. There were some creepy sounds on here. The whispered vox, a theremin-like synth, an almost cheesy synth/organ. They combined well to produce an upbeat, but unsettling track.
Good work  |
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| ^ | Joined: 13 Mar 2009 Member: #203012 Location: UK | ||
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BTW, the "radiant shrine" the lyrics talk about is TV So this was a politically charged song.
----- LYRICS ------ look at your radiant shrine it's hard to please it's molding your whole life filled with false needs it tells what you should be but that's a lie just think for yourself this time you need to rise rise beautiful things oh beautiful things beautiful things oh beautiful things you have to understand my friend all the shit they feed ya people swallow what you give them they've come to like the taste look at your radiant shrine it's hard to please it's molding your whole life filled with false needs it tells what you should be but that's a lie just think for yourself this time you need to rise beautiful things oh beautiful things beautiful things oh beautiful things look at your radiant shrine it's hard to please it's molding your whole life filled with false needs it tells what you should be but that's a lie just think for yourself this time you need to rise ---- Misspellers of the world, unit! http://aflecht.blogspot.com/ http://www.youtube.com/aflecht http://www.youtube.com/krakulandia |
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| ^ | Joined: 13 Oct 2003 Member: #9660 Location: Kallio, Helsinki, Finland, Earth |
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