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My new track - [Progressive House\Chillout] BenU - Skylight

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benyuliel
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25 posts since 20 Jan, 2013

Postby benyuliel; Sun Jan 20, 2013 9:12 am My new track - [Progressive House\Chillout] BenU - Skylight

Hello everyone,

A Track I just finished - or at least I finished.

Just want to hear some comments, and feedbacks about the track.

- What do you think the track is lacking?
- what are the good parts?
- Would the track be better if I focus on the latter part as a chillout track and leave the whole "dance" concept?

https://soundcloud.com/ben-u/benu-skylight


Thanks!
benyuliel
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25 posts since 20 Jan, 2013

Postby benyuliel; Tue Jan 22, 2013 7:51 am

3catsDeep
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20 posts since 11 Mar, 2012, from https://soundcloud.com/3catsdeep

Postby 3catsDeep; Wed Jan 23, 2013 1:52 am

The track is good, but for me it seems to progress too quickly and perhaps there is a bit much happening in just four 'n a bit minutes. Having said that I do lean towards the minimal side of things and enjoy a slow progression.

The first minute is my favourite part, driving and moody.
i think the track could easily be reworked into a piece of chillout/electronica, whether that would be better or not I don't know.
Anyway, I enjoyed listening!
benyuliel
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25 posts since 20 Jan, 2013

Postby benyuliel; Thu Jan 24, 2013 11:27 am

Thanks for the detailed feedback!

i guess i do sometimes i do put to much in 4 minutes...
Mariosprt
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310 posts since 3 Feb, 2012

Postby Mariosprt; Thu Jan 24, 2013 2:03 pm

I quite enjoyed this track, very nice melodies, and very nice mood.
I don't know if a progressive track is supposed to "progress" like that :) but it goes somewhere and I like that.
Great job!
dark_virus
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1559 posts since 28 Jun, 2007, from Amazon rain forest

Postby dark_virus; Fri Jan 25, 2013 9:25 am

The production is clean and crispy, but the track needs a complete arrangement to reach full potential.

For some reason, I can't imagine it as a dance floor hit, but a more home listening experience, which is equaly valid too! :)
3catsDeep
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20 posts since 11 Mar, 2012, from https://soundcloud.com/3catsdeep

Postby 3catsDeep; Fri Jan 25, 2013 9:47 pm

benyuliel wrote:Thanks for the detailed feedback!

i guess i do sometimes i do put to much in 4 minutes...


No worries mate, i often can't really think of much to say - say "i like it" if I like it or keep my mouth shut if I dont!

Thanks for checking out my stuff on Soundcloud too!
take it easy...
benyuliel
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25 posts since 20 Jan, 2013

Postby benyuliel; Sun Jan 27, 2013 7:34 am

Mariosprt wrote:I quite enjoyed this track, very nice melodies, and very nice mood.

Thanks for the comment! I really appreciate this!

dark_virus wrote:For some reason, I can't imagine it as a dance floor hit, but a more home listening experience, which is equaly valid too! :)


Again, thanks for the comment, it really helps a lot :)

It wasn't meant to be a dancefloor track, so at least this i got right :)

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