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A friend of me wrote a poem and asked me to sing it:
Words, lost in time
My muse is no where to be found,
emptiness echoes through my mind
Leaving shallow thoughts of silent sound.
My mind is trapped in a house of bones,
The skeleton has lost the key,
Only a muse with a rhyming tongue
Can break these chains and set me free.
Where have you gone?
Can you hear them whisper in the wind?
Are the crossroads calling out?
Is there another lost soul to mend?
Poetic phrases flowed like wine
Now they're drowning in my sorrow,
The crossroads lead me to where i stand
I hope my muse finds me tomorrow.
Left smoldering and all alone
Like a flameless candle in the dark,
I closed my eyes and prayed for fire
Send a miracle to strike this spark.
Then it occured to me.
Youre standing in front of me
As it occured to me.
You were standing in front of me.
YAF --- House Of Bones
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- Narcissistic Messiah
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- KVRAF
- 3198 posts since 28 Aug, 2012 from Melbourne, Australia
Sounds great! Singing and music are both good. I like the way you vary the verses musically so they fit the lyrics. It freshens up the track. Well done! 
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- Narcissistic Messiah
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thanks sir!Allomerus wrote:Sounds great! Singing and music are both good. I like the way you vary the verses musically so they fit the lyrics. It freshens up the track. Well done!
had to work quick
glad it turned out well
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- Narcissistic Messiah
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- KVRian
- 1325 posts since 17 Aug, 2012 from Old Zealand
AgreeAllomerus wrote:Sounds great! Singing and music are both good. I like the way you vary the verses musically so they fit the lyrics. It freshens up the track. Well done!
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- Narcissistic Messiah
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sbj wrote:AgreeAllomerus wrote:Sounds great! Singing and music are both good. I like the way you vary the verses musically so they fit the lyrics. It freshens up the track. Well done!
