crying hearts: new mix

[Meloday]

hey all,

I cut the intro and worked with giving some space to breathehope's voice.

comments, critiques are appreciated.

thanks

breathehope and meloday

http://audioshots.com/auditorium/viewto ... 1462#11462

[VitaminD]

where is breathehope lately? she has a great voice

the bass sound you used sounds really cheap imo but nice rhythm though.. also timing feels very loose and out of it.. vocal timing with the rest of the song that is gives it a bar karaoke feel to it.. i'd work on this first thing..

blipping chime sound in the background is out of tune with the other instrumentation in the song.. very awkward sounding bleeep blooop bleeepppp bloooop bleeeeeep blooooop..

everything else including bg melodies strings and fx are good imo..

[ketillien]

I liked this song, and i especially liked the almost childlike vocals, reminded me a bit of Bjork

[breathehope]

where is breathehope lately? she has a great voice

I'm here still!

I like the whole musical "style" still greatly much, but I liked the other mix better, I agree with vitamin, the timing was weird, as far as mixing. the music is right up my alley though.

the vocal treatment was really alot nicer than the other mix. I like the way you put a warmness on my voice.

I really like the intro too.

JARED - Thank you so much for spending your time on my vocals. it makes my heart warm. I will contact via MSN soon, to see about doing something different

For everyone else, I still am doing music, just being a bit slow about it. not rushing so much. I find it easy to make up melodies, just not beats and drumming, I just find myself making simple microbeats, and thats it! Definitely will find someone in the future to help me with this if I ever wanna release a EP.