Music I've done, feedback please?
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- KVRer
- Topic Starter
- 19 posts since 15 Apr, 2004
Here are 2 tracks of mine, I don't know what you'll make of them, I've listened to a number of styles here and would appreciate a few comments , I dont hear many people doing this.
Do they sound finished? Any comments welcome. Thanks
http://www.project168.co.uk/music/proje ... titled.mp3
http://www.project168.co.uk/music/proje ... t_song.mp3
Do they sound finished? Any comments welcome. Thanks
http://www.project168.co.uk/music/proje ... titled.mp3
http://www.project168.co.uk/music/proje ... t_song.mp3
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- The tallest of the gang
- 373 posts since 1 Jul, 2002 from Yon London
Blimey. Interesting. Very dark. Can see something going badly wrong in a dystopian film with a shifty-looking John Hurt.
As far as fiinshed goes, I'd tinker with the mix some- it's a bit boomy and all bass. I'd eq out a little of the mud and add some twinkly highs. If it were me. Which it isn't.
As far as fiinshed goes, I'd tinker with the mix some- it's a bit boomy and all bass. I'd eq out a little of the mud and add some twinkly highs. If it were me. Which it isn't.
- KVRAF
- 1955 posts since 5 Sep, 2003 from Denmark
Hi and welcome!
Interesting tracks. I like the first one best. I like the darkness and bass heavyiness and the intentional digital distortion. Sounds finished to me. The second track seems less personal to me. Too easy somehow.
Interesting tracks. I like the first one best. I like the darkness and bass heavyiness and the intentional digital distortion. Sounds finished to me. The second track seems less personal to me. Too easy somehow.
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- KVRist
- 192 posts since 27 Sep, 2004
Dude, thats some dark shit. That first ones quite good - especially cause it doesn't go on for too long. It really sets the mood and slinks off - I appreciate that. Might be good with a "heartbeat" thrown in there, even if its somewhat polyrhythmic.
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