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apan · Post by **apan** » Tue Jun 02, 2009 10:32 am

Rough mix, and I might make some slight changes yet, but I would really like some feedback on this one, both in terms of arrangement and mixing.

http://www.bahnhof.se/wb549584/index/yo ... %20run.mp3

apan · Post by **apan** » Wed Jun 03, 2009 6:27 pm

D.H. Miltz · Post by **D.H. Miltz** » Thu Jun 04, 2009 2:06 am

Overall, I like this. There's one percussion sound--a crunch or scrape of some kind--that's too loud and insistent, I think. The sound of the song itself is good (on my computer speakers and cheap headphones), and the song is nicely done. Good vocals.

apan · Post by **apan** » Thu Jun 04, 2009 5:22 am

Ok, I know what you mean, I'll bring it down a little. Thanks for listening! Cheers

rockstar_not · Post by **rockstar_not** » Fri Jun 05, 2009 4:58 am

Really enjoying this.

Nice command of you vocals and knowing what kind of tune will showcase it the best.

Has a Brian Ferry / Roxy Music avalon era feel to the vox.

-Scott

hibidy · Post by **hibidy** » Fri Jun 05, 2009 5:02 am

I like it, I wish I could sing

hibidy · Post by **hibidy** » Fri Jun 05, 2009 5:04 am

btw, you don't like the smiths or Depeche Mode, do you ?

apan · Post by **apan** » Fri Jun 05, 2009 1:28 pm

Thanks guys!

hibidy: let me put it this way, the file was called something like "depechemodeish" before I had any lyrics

Not my "home genre" by any means but it was fun to make.

Scott: Roxy music is kind of unknown territory for me...youtube next, then...

Thanks for listening!

apan · Post by **apan** » Fri Jun 12, 2009 7:46 am

Looking to mix this more thoroughly this weekend, so any additional thoughts on the mix would be much appreciated.

Cheers!

new tune