minimal ambient track - looking for feedback please.

[gunuph]

http://www.gunuph.info/mp3s/maldod.mp3

Very basic minimal ambient tune (2m 45s).

Any feedback appreciated. My only concern with it is its too basic maybe...

Warren

[manducator]

The bass sound is the prominent sound in this son, right?

I would make it a bit more exciting (some filtering or delay or whatever floats your boat) with some automation.

The rest is great as it is. I enjoyed listening. I have a link to some ambient myself in my signature.

[gunuph]

thanks for comments - I do quite like it as it is but agree it does perhaps need something else. Will try out a few different things tonight based on your suggestions.
Have downloaded your ep and will give it a listen tonight.

thanks

Warren

[manducator]

The ep isn't exactly ambient but the soundcloud link is.

[tehlord]

Would probably work better as a soundtrack to some imagery.

I found it interesting to listen to, but perhaps a little tedious.

[abletondummy10]

There's some bass notes that are too overpowering and in use too often... however approximately 1 minute of this track would serve as a powerful intro to a main lead track... you just need to come up with the lead track now!

[qube123]

Conceptually I like what it's doing but didn't get on with the mix, it needs to be a lot more subtle but the bass is too loud and you lose the rest of it.

I'd turn it down and add some super-subtle pads over it.

Be interested in hearing more though.

[gunuph]

Thanks for feedback guys - really appreciated. I've revisited the song a few times in last couple of days but not sure what to do with it. I think i'll chop it down and EQ it a bit to use as a segue from/into something else.