2ndMOUSE --- Lion Eyes ( Fast detroit techno / glitch ) WIP

[2NDMOUSE]

Still a helluva lot more tweaks to do.
mixed and EQ'd on headphones so far , so i wanna add more sub and maybe a gary numan kinda heavily delayed sound , but the bones are there.
What y'all think so far ??

Lion Eyes (work in progress)

Would be grateful of your thoughts on it. What would you do next ??

all feedback returned

cheers =)

[seismic1]

This is pretty good as it is. I would agree that you need to get some more bass on here. Not much low end through my KRKs. I like the synth that comes in at about 2:52. Maybe you could develop that theme a little. Those vocal edits and the drums are tasty.

[2NDMOUSE]

I listened back to it with the monitors and its awful lol. I need to EQ every single sound individually cos i just made up entire beats and EQ'd the whole things as a composite , and it really doesnt work. It'll take months giving each sound its own channel and tweaking them. Not happy with it at all the way it is.....shouldnt have uploaded it in its present form .....