Enjoy at least something
Xy Glitch - Faded Memories (feedback needed)
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- KVRist
- 119 posts since 22 Jan, 2012
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- KVRist
- Topic Starter
- 119 posts since 22 Jan, 2012
wow was it that bad?
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- KVRist
- Topic Starter
- 119 posts since 22 Jan, 2012
bump!
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- KVRAF
- 3471 posts since 19 Aug, 2008 from USA-lien In the 8th Dimention
What the HELL, was that crap!?Sinlesssin wrote:wow was it that bad?
Actually, its really good! What tools are you using?
Following you on SC now!
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- KVRAF
- 6179 posts since 29 Mar, 2003 from Location: Location
I got something from the second half...that held my attention.
If I were going to make any changes to it, I would thin out the drums a lot, and put some fairly light guitar stomp box type distortion on them. The gated drum sound is very dated to the 80's new wave, Thomas Dolby... and rock...Phil Collins. Effecting it might get them in to more of a today sound. Gated drums just haven't yet been excepted as retro unless your doing new wave.
The opening half is all drums for the exception of some tones. Takes to long to get interesting...needs something or shorten it and build on the second half.
Just an opinion.
If I were going to make any changes to it, I would thin out the drums a lot, and put some fairly light guitar stomp box type distortion on them. The gated drum sound is very dated to the 80's new wave, Thomas Dolby... and rock...Phil Collins. Effecting it might get them in to more of a today sound. Gated drums just haven't yet been excepted as retro unless your doing new wave.
The opening half is all drums for the exception of some tones. Takes to long to get interesting...needs something or shorten it and build on the second half.
Just an opinion.
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- KVRian
- 657 posts since 21 Aug, 2003
Did you take it down? The link is broken now it seems...
EDIT: Now it works!
Hmm, the first half definitely could use some work and I agree with annode there. The second half has a lot more going for it, and the drums work well in the second half too imo. Somehow I find it lacks structure though, there are cool parts but I'm not feeling the progression somehow.
EDIT: Now it works!
Hmm, the first half definitely could use some work and I agree with annode there. The second half has a lot more going for it, and the drums work well in the second half too imo. Somehow I find it lacks structure though, there are cool parts but I'm not feeling the progression somehow.
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- KVRist
- Topic Starter
- 119 posts since 22 Jan, 2012
ok I reupload the song
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- KVRist
- Topic Starter
- 119 posts since 22 Jan, 2012
Ok and not quite understand what you mean that the "dubstep" part has more going on?Programentalist wrote:Did you take it down? The link is broken now it seems...
EDIT: Now it works!
Hmm, the first half definitely could use some work and I agree with annode there. The second half has a lot more going for it, and the drums work well in the second half too imo. Somehow I find it lacks structure though, there are cool parts but I'm not feeling the progression somehow.
can you like break it in seconds or minutes.
Thank you guys fomr giving feedback!